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[fable_geddes]

Verse 1:
I dunno why I am,
All I no is I am,
Noone knows why I'm like this,

Pre-chorus:
But only you know,
But Only you know,
But only you know why I'm Like this

Chorus:
I'm Haten this!!!
Your rippin me off
I'm haten this,
Why'd you do that
Why'd you do that
I'M HATEN THIS!!!!

Verse 2:
Everywhere I go I see you with somebody else,
with sombody else,
I know that when your with them im haten this.

Pre-Chorus 2:
But only you know,
But only you know why

Chorus:
I'm Haten this!!!
Your rippin me off
I'm haten this,
Why'd you do that
Why'd you do that
I'M HATEN THIS!!!!

[Dawid]

That's pretty cool, just one comment though. You really don't need three exclamation marks.