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[DjLuki]

hry anyone here write rap lyrics? i made some beats and still making but i can't write lyrics for u no what..... cany anyone write me like 2 or 3 verses? just wanna see if i can make it work with my beats...

[ZeroHawk]

I can try. I usually make "comedy raps" that end up pretty funny... SO what should they be about?

[switch]

yeah that's what i do too. one of my friends wrote a poem to pay me out one day. i ended up writing 4 verses of rap in retaliation. oh wow, that was gold. lol.

but don't be discouraged, writing meaningful song lyrics is incredibly difficult, especially when the song focuses on them so much like in rap.

[DjLuki]

well they can be about anything.. things that happen in life i guess.. i don't have a specific topic or dising other people ppl,rappers .

[BuffaloHelp]

Although this is NO POST COUNT zone, and I quote

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Anything you wrote that you would like to show off and share with us. ** NO SPAM **
In this part of the forum, you can put all your poems and songs, ect. Just all your creative stuff...

Please keep in mind that we have to abide by the forum rules and descriptions. Please post ONLY your original works here and request elsewhere.

Thank you.

[DjLuki]

ok...problem is that theres no other board to actualy request something liek this and thsi is the only one that had lyrics on it so..

[BuffaloHelp]

I understand the dilemma. We do have another lyric section
Life Talk > Music lyrics
and when you make your request there, hopefully the reply would be posted here (since it's original). If not moderators will move it to the appropriate place.

It's just that a new topic should start in the right place.

Thanks for addressing something that all members can benefit.

[Hiaito]

I did it once when I was really, really, really, bored! I thought i'd be the next Enimen or something.

[Becca]

This post is in the wrong place...

Anyways I wrote one whole song in like 10 minutes...well raps whatever they are called. And it was ok i rapped it on the microphone to my mate and showed her the lyrics, which she said were awesome...BUT it has too many swear words so I can't post it and I don't really want to show it because it was kind written 'back in those days' where I was IN DA GHETTO MOOD and loving RnB...

It all rhymed and it was a quick rap. The words were simple fast (1 syllable mainly) and they made sense in a sentance hehe..

[BordaForx]

Yeah, here are some lyrics I made for you...take it as your own work, I don't care. I'm just gonna give suggestions for the chorus:
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CHORUS
I guess I'm just being me
Everything I see
It sets me free
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ANOTHER SUGGESTION FOR CHORUS
Maybe we've come to
I will be there when you fall down
Putting on you, the crown
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ANOTHER SUGGESTION FOR CHORUS
I always had a plan
I don't know what I am
But it's all been crammed
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ANOTHER SUGGESTION FOR CHORUS
All that pain
I've been faint
While it was just rain
What a shame

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Take whichever you want. Take the one that fits your song the most.