11 replies to this topic

[Nani Cheri]

Hi! I have made a new website... Its still in Dutch, and I have hosted it thru geocities temporary, because fisrt I have to upgrade my credits...and err well, that can take a while LOL But ehh let me know what you think, ofcourse you wouldnt understand the content of it, but maybe some feedback about the template I made with fireworks, flash and dreamweaver?

thanks

My Website

Edited by Nani Cheri, 23 August 2006 - 06:22 PM.

[Bkag]

Excluding the hosting (it took a long time to load) and the content aside (i dont understand dutch) i would give it a high 8

What could be improved

The blue bar to the right in my opinion should be extended down to the bottom of the page

The title welcome to easy euros is in white on the blue background is quite difficult to see, mabe change it to gray

Last thing is i realy like those flash animations in the title bar but i did not immediately notice them, i would make them a bit bolder. What did you make them with?

[Nani Cheri]

Thanks for you feedback, I noticd that too that it loaded slow, but I thought that was just my internet... I hope it will get better if I put it under trap17 hosting, or do you think that would not matter? As for the bar on the left, I will do that, that could look better thanks. The blocks I made with Flash, but I actually made them light intentional, because I didnt want that to be very striking.

And I will take a look at the welcome part

[Bkag]

It will load faster with trap17 geocities is always slow especialy since your site is using flash.

[Plenoptic]

Looks pretty good. It'll look nicer without the Yahoo ads. I would change the title though that shows up in the title bar because right now it says website2.gif The design is sort of plain but nice with the flash so I wouldn't change it. Pretty nice over all I like it.

[TypoMage]

Your site looks great unfortunetly I cannot read Dutch. So I really do not know what it is about but the layout it awsome! So keep it up and put a translation on it!

[bhavesh]

Your site's Template is cool
But again language barrier every word in the site was alien to me, whenever you make the english version dont forget to give the update here.
You have still not implemented the suggestion mentioned above.
What are you doing , come on, be quick.

[Panzer]

There were no loading problems for me. I like the template and basically everything about it! If your having a hard time translating just use the google web translator.

[CrazyRob]

yes as panzer said you can use a web page translator i used Babelfish as i personally think its a better translator. Anaway

1. what is the site about as at the moment it looks like some training website?

2. it would look good with different text and colours

3. there is a bit to much white space

4. its a bit to plain

but appart from that well done i really like the flash and the use of colour so keep up the good work.

[Dawiss]

I think the website is too bright and way too simple.. I would add some darker things to it so it dont look like white paper with few a bit darker places.. The verdena font is ok.. maybe you need to make the website smaller because I looked thrue it and there isnt lots of information.. and the animation is ok ..

[garbage]

well the site loaded ok for me. as far as the layout was,it was good, nice clean simple and looked professional. I think you made a a great looking site there.. too bad I did not know what the content was about.

[Nani Cheri]

bhavesh, on Aug 24 2006, 09:06 PM, said:

Your site's Template is cool
But again language barrier every word in the site was alien to me, whenever you make the english version dont forget to give the update here.
You have still not implemented the suggestion mentioned above.
What are you doing , come on, be quick.

Whaahahah well okay than Bhavesh I've changed the title, guess I forgot the most important things, but thats why I ask second opinons here so you guys can tell me what I have overlooked. I made an english version and it is done

Panzer: Thanks for the tip about translating it in Google, but I translated my self already, I saw your reply post too late!

Many of you think it's a bit to plain, but I made this template in 2 days and for me that is a very short time actually hahaha, I actually didn't spend much time in it because it had to be done fast. I thought it was to plain too but I was afraid I would mess it up, and besides it doesn't disturb me really. The content is the important thing actually. I want them to concentrate on the content . But if someone has some suggestions for making it less plain, ofcourse you can share it with me

I have been very busy, and I have to post more because right now my account is suspended, so untill I have enough credits, and if my account is unsespended I will remove it from Geocities and put it under Trap 17, duhhhhh hahahha


So take a look again at my website

Edited by Nani Cheri, 27 August 2006 - 12:08 PM.