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#1 PlugComputers

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 01:17 AM

Hey all-

Check out the link in my sig to my new computer company website. I finally added the e-commerce side to my business, should help me out.

Let me know what you think of design, I know the "New Technologies" link doesn't work right, as I haven't uploaded that page yet.

Oh and 1 thing specific, in the header what do you think of the line "Explain your needs and let us build them" Does that sound right? Any suggestions?

Thanks, any constructive critism would be appreciated..

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 01:21 AM

nice...but on pages you cant see the text...look at the submit your build...you cant see the text above the boxes

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 01:29 AM

Sorry but. What is with the black and grayish text? It is kinda hard to read. But nice job on your site. Going into the computer buisness. (I want to build my own computer)

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 01:50 AM

Yeah, Some people have been saying that. Maybe I just havent noticed it because my monitor is nice and bright. I guess if a user is browsing the website with an older monitor is may be a little bit more difficult to see the lighter text on the black background. Any suggestions to what color I should change it to? Maybe closer to a silver, rather than a gray? Something a little more white?

If you goto the "Schedule your build" page and see the cases that are links.. is that color easier to read? Maybe all the text in a similar color?

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 01:58 AM

i guess i could answer for a free computer....muhahha but yea a little more silver will do for those of us with old people vision

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 02:00 AM

Haha a free computer eh? Well I don't know what I could do about that. How about one like I have listed in the Portfolio page? I bet anyone would go for one of those, very unique.

But anyways, thanks for the suggestion. A brighter, silver color would probably be nice for those who have "seeing issues" as I like to put it. Haha you're not old, just moer seasoned than some of us... :lol:

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 02:06 AM

omfg! that is a beautiful computer....it shall be mine....im breaking in and stealing it...dont tell anyone though!...yes im seasoned heh

noticed that in your html you didnt have this
<meta name="description" content="your site description goes here." />
<meta name="keywords" content=" words that the user can search for in order to see your site on the search engine, seperate each word with a comma." />
<meta name="robots" content="index, follow" />
filled in...will bring in traffic...believe me

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 02:13 AM

Hmm, must have missed those metatags when doing the coding. Definately need to fill those in for some traffic.

Oh and that computer can be yours for about $1100? Around there, in blue, green, orange, or red. Haha your choice, incase you DON'T want to steal it.

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Posted 25 October 2006 - 02:15 AM

its worth that...nice price....but im afraid im out of quarters...but i will have it no later than 2 years! still be around then :lol:? ...not joking
i will work for it :(

Edited by the_aggie10, 25 October 2006 - 02:15 AM.


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Posted 25 October 2006 - 02:18 AM

Of course, 2 years from now I think you'll be able to get a little bit more for that amount though, as far as technology goes, but still the same cool look. The clear cases are really neat, it lights up the whole room. If the lights gets annoying there are switches that can turn off 2 of the lights, or all 4. Cool computer.




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