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[encryptedwrath]

I know it's nothing spectacular , but it was my first ever try at space art


some critique is appreciated , but please don't rip it to shreds , it's my first go D:

Edited by encryptedwrath, 23 December 2008 - 12:19 AM.

[Echo_of_thunder]

wow very nice, myself loving good graphics I really like it but for one little thing. the star burst in the upper left. Would have toned it down a little, to me it makes it a little lop sided. Great work though. Should try something like that in 3D

[Tramposch]

Looks nice, but it seems as if in the planet that has a giant.. crack? in it.. it makes the planet look flat, try to like.. curve it with the planets sphere shape.

[Ridwan sameer]

nice designs, agree with tramp though

[Echo_of_thunder]

Tramposch, on Dec 23 2008, 10:16 AM, said:

Looks nice, but it seems as if in the planet that has a giant.. crack? in it.. it makes the planet look flat, try to like.. curve it with the planets sphere shape.

Tram what kind of monitor you using? Looks round here, and looks more like a globe than any of the others. now the one to the upper left on the other hand, looks more as a eclips moon. oh well the whole thing to me still rates a 8.5

[encryptedwrath]

Echo_of_thunder, on Dec 23 2008, 07:27 AM, said:

wow very nice, myself loving good graphics I really like it but for one little thing. the star burst in the upper left. Would have toned it down a little, to me it makes it a little lop sided. Great work though. Should try something like that in 3D

Tramposch, on Dec 23 2008, 03:16 PM, said:

Looks nice, but it seems as if in the planet that has a giant.. crack? in it.. it makes the planet look flat, try to like.. curve it with the planets sphere shape.

Ridwan sameer, on Dec 23 2008, 05:04 PM, said:

nice designs, agree with tramp though

Echo_of_thunder, on Dec 23 2008, 05:07 PM, said:

Tram what kind of monitor you using? Looks round here, and looks more like a globe than any of the others. now the one to the upper left on the other hand, looks more as a eclips moon. oh well the whole thing to me still rates a 8.5

Thanks for all the critique , and @ Tramposch it looks pretty spherical to me

[Tramposch]

Echo_of_thunder, on Dec 23 2008, 12:07 PM, said:

Tram what kind of monitor you using? Looks round here, and looks more like a globe than any of the others. now the one to the upper left on the other hand, looks more as a eclips moon. oh well the whole thing to me still rates a 8.5

I'm using a viewsonic vx1945WM if you wanted to know (19"). I am saying that the crack doesnt look uniform because, on the green glob if you look more to the right side, a little lower than the center, at the point where the globe meets the edge it should really have some curving effect, and the crack on the globe does not get smaller to make as if the distance would be farther, seeing its curving.

Does that make sense? But over all I rate it an 8/10.

[onscreen]

Solid artwork there. How i wish its a bigger piece. IMO, the text and the glow on the top left spoil the whole thing. The lava cracks is good over there as it will be the focus point of everything. Those smoke effects isnt necessary.

One question : Are those planets part of your own creation?

[enderforce]

I think it's cool. Also, I think the issue about the planet with the crack is just perceptual. Some people see it as flatter, some see it as more spherical.

[cyber_electrons]

Great art. The shades are well made. All the matters seemed realistic and fictional due to the unknowns so I think it's a good piece/.

Mind giving a tutorial or something? (resources can help!)