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[LastCause]

Chek out some of the templates i have made. All critics welcome as usual!





this is one is pretty old by the way i still like it though ^^

[SaNJ]

Hey I saw your templates ..they are awsome....

I liked the blue one the most...
Hey what did u use to create these...
I too want to make a site of my own...I have the space here at trap17...
I have used a template...and I want to use an original of mine...
so can u help me??

[sonesay]

Not bad but to be frank you need to refine your work further. I'm assuming your just starting out so its not a bad overall design for all of them but they still lack any wow factor in my opinion. It still looks amateurish in my eyes no offense intended. I would not call them template technically because they are more accurately described as designs. Templates are working/implemented designs that have been put to use. i.e all images of design are split up and HTML code is written appropriately to contain the design. I could be wrong but thats how I see templates as.

Anyhow keep at what your doing and you'll always get better. Learn about design principles/guidelines as well as it will help you in your future creations.

Edit: Sorry my bad they are templates since they are in use. I just checked out your site. I thought they were just initial designs.

Edited by sonesay, 21 July 2009 - 10:47 PM.

[LastCause]

thanks a lot for your advise! And yes i am still practising ^^

[Tramposch]

They are alright, just the one thing that is bugging me is everything is so damn big!

I'm too lazy to make a full post now, but like navigation, text, et cetera is so big! It adds an amateurish feel to it.

[TheDisturbedOne]

The first one is a bit too bright for me, and probably for most people. If you are going to use green, I would suggest a darker and more neutral green, so it isn't bright, and so that it is easy to read.

The second one is nice. The only suggestion I would have is to change the buttons. You could make them more rounded or round them off at the end.

The last one I like the best. It is very neat, and the colors go together well.

Nice work overall, just a few small things that you can do to make the templates look a lot better.