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[anwiii]

thought i would share something i wrote after i woke up today....

sometimes i want to say
sometimes i want to pray
sometimes i don't know what to say
day after day

sometimes i know what's right
sometimes i want to fight
sometimes it's a sight
day after day

the poisons i feel
the poisons i heal
how can i deal
day after day

it's a big deal
it's how i feel
life is real
day after day

the masks people wear
it's hard to bare
it's hard to care
day after day

i take within
it ain't no sin
even if i don't win
day after day

it's worth the fight
like stars at midnight
what a sight
day after day

so people will be good
as they should
while i am misunderstood
day after day

[web_designer]

i like what you wrote anwiii. deep and strong meanings. keep on writing my friend and post them here to share us your thoughts.

[bluefashion]

Great article.Like here ,so much beutiful words!

[iAssistant]

Wow! Your poem is nice!It is like a song

[ritu]

I like it because your poem carries a lot of meaning yet very negligible number of voluminous words are used. Poems usually portray the intense feelings of the poet, but use of literary technicalities takes away from it the original flavour , thankfully, you have successfully avoided that.