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[Rogu3]

Rate */10 if you will. Helpful advice would also be great
I tried to get the whole blending thing going, I even put in a light source into the first one to make it all match

Cheers,
Rogue

Edited by Rogu3, 23 November 2010 - 11:56 AM.

[web_designer]

in general, it is a good work, and it shows that it is not the work of a beginner. but i must say that you need to work more hard to have your own touch and to increase your skills. when you get the point of making a unique designs then you could say that you are an expert.

for those two, i liked the first signature more than the second one. even it seems you worked hard on the second signature but it looks fade, and not clear. also i think you should choose another background, because this one is not fit with the render. so will rate the first one 6/10 and the second one 4/10. good luck in your next signature, and keep on posting here.

[Rogu3]

Thanks for the feedback

Im only in high school so i've still got plenty of time ahead of me! But with the second one.. you said i needed a different background. I actually used the whole render picture to make the background by smudging, rotating and blurring it, so i thought it would fit nicely. Obviously not!

Edited by Rogu3, 24 November 2010 - 08:08 AM.

[johnmarsh]

yes nice feed back thanks for that

[Rogu3]

Little bit of an update! Re-rate please

Edited by Rogu3, 26 November 2010 - 07:41 AM.

[Tramposch]

Rogu3, on 25 November 2010 - 09:13 PM, said:

Little bit of an update! Re-rate please

Good signatures!

Sig 1 - I really like this one, although it lacks a sense of flow, that is alright with this kind of signature. What I think it lacks is depth, I'm not sure if your aim is for the light coming from the background to light up the render as well as the background, but I think it might look better if those aprts are better lit in the render, to give the signature a bit more depth. The text has no real flow to it, what I liked to do sometimes with these kind of signatures is use a bit smaller text, and put it along something like the gun barrel, between the front sight and the rear scope sight.

Sig 2 - I can't really give a lot of credit, because I'm not sure what was done, for all I could know, this could be a wallpaper that you cut off and made a signature and put your name on it, not saying that it is, but it doesn't have a sense of a signature, something to say you made it, and its yours, you know?

Over all you did a good job, great for a beginner. What grade are you in highschool now?